Guy Ritchie Still, and the outline for my story

My short film will start with the radio coming on in the form of an alarm, Ares by Bloc Party playing. The character will jump out of bed in a rush, with a still frame and a short voice over introduction to him. He swings open the door, and then stumbles into the toilet, slamming the door behind him. He looks around, and sees a dirty toothbrush lying on the floor, picks it up and brushes his teeth, he then picks up a half empty (or full) can/bottle of lager and rinses his mouth out with it. He walks back into his room, pulls on some jeans, a polo top and a jacket before heading down the stairs. As he gets down the stairs, there is a banging on the door and someone shouting at him, he then runs through the house, grabs a plastic bag with something in, and leaps out of a window, and then over a gate. As he walks quickly down the road, he looks over his shoulder, and then starts running. As he is running he throws the bag into a bush.